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Friday, June 18, 2010

daydreamer---EDITED

Vs.1
when we look
you dont see me
blind to reality

when I speak
you barely turn
enough to hear me
((screaming I need you))


Pre chorus
Screaming I need you
I’ll be staying here
But a daydreamer you’ll be
-chorus-
I want to shake
every thought
out of your head
and leave just one

I want to leave
You with nothing


Vs.2
If you let go
Your mind is
Free to know

If you figure out
That I’ve only been
Trying too hard
((Ill be staying here))
Pre chorus to tag

--------------------------interlude-----------------------------

TAG
Thought for me
Time for me
But a daydreamer-you’ll be

END
I want to leave
You with nothing













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